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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-12-04 07:07 AM



Unashamed

here I stand
in front of you
unashamed
and if it be true
in this command
of language that
you think I have
I pour
but it comes
only from my heart
lips could never breathe
the words I feel
they flow uncontrollably
and I can not
stop their tumble
but do they flow
to open arms
or deaf ears
for I remain
unashamed

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KoKo
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since 2003-02-15
Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow
1 posted 2003-12-04 07:10 AM


Wow...yeah.


Kahlil
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since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881

2 posted 2003-12-04 08:56 AM


...straight from the heart... a lovely piece... ~K~
Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178

3 posted 2003-12-04 09:24 AM


Powerful and filled with beauty.

Eric

suthern
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since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723
Louisiana
4 posted 2003-12-04 01:06 PM


lips could never breathe
the words I feel
they flow uncontrollably
and I can not
stop their tumble

Incredible write, lady! *S*

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
5 posted 2003-12-04 01:10 PM


oh the feeling of standing unashamed...
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