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titch k
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0 posted 2003-12-04 06:01 AM



My shadow sticks
I'm spun out,
on a jutting rock!
Forgotten; So are the vines
Heaven, rid of it's pupil
Springtime,
sing me your song;
Watching and pining
You boasted you were
a match for love;
You lie there, flirting
with your eyes;
A mixture of dialects

O Love,
all that Holy race
And at last;
You've come!
And tonight, was the night,
I was to come to you,
in odd likenesses
Creating both the singer
and the audience;
I ache for thy captivity
careless of form or face
My fierce impatience ends
Still, let my tyrants know

O many named,
and many shrined
Mouth watering
and as soft as sleep
I am lost for words,
to say how lovely you are
And relish her longing;
Soundless, a Realm,
unresting presence;
The feelings I would share
A city of your own;
It's beautiful; And you'll say,
all that needs said !


Titch

[This message has been edited by titch k (12-04-2003 06:02 AM).]

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1 posted 2003-12-04 08:14 AM


O many named,
and many shrined
Mouth watering
and as soft as sleep
I am lost for words,
to say how lovely you are
And relish her longing;
Soundless, a Realm,
unresting presence;
The feelings I would share
A city of your own;
It's beautiful; And you'll say,
all that needs said !



Titch, I especially liked this last verse.
Hugs  
Ethel

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