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Silent Heartaches |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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~*~ It's been years since then however quitely they pass time takes it's toll on emotions rolled up into days and silent heartaches so much left unsaid but never forgotten and always, I keep you close like an unmarked grave laid to rest your being never strays from the leaving buried memories, overgrown with weeds the moments linger long after the flowers have died misplaced from the beginning what never was or might have been brushing back a tear that has no place to fall. ~*~ |
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Obscurity Member
since 2003-12-04
Posts 153In A Melancholic Dream |
I thought this was a beautiful piece, it was sad yet rather powerful. To write suchas you did, it's amazing... I applaud you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
God  you know I know exactly how this feels...hugs to you Lori girl |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Dear sweet Lori, you truly are the queen of the blues...... No-one else can write sad poems so beautifully.  Hugs, my friend  Ethel |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
lori, heartbreaking open honest write...i felt this one! *hugs* take care hon. amy  p.s. "brushing back a tear that has no place to fall" that is such an awesome line, and hits hard! powerful yet graceful, you do that so well. "love is like a butterfly-- |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Lori hon, I know these silent heartaches so well and wish that neither one of us had to know them, but in the end it is these things that make us that much stronger and I see such strength in you sweet  poetess. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"It's been years since then however quitely they pass time takes it's toll on emotions rolled up into days and silent heartaches so much left unsaid but never forgotten and always, I keep you close like an unmarked grave laid to rest your being never strays from the leaving buried memories, overgrown with weeds the moments linger long after the flowers have died misplaced from the beginning what never was or might have been brushing back a tear that has no place to fall." ~ I started out with the intention of quoting my favourite lines and ended up copying the whole poem! I suppose "brushing back a tear that has no place to fall" was my favourite ~ the creativity, uniqueness, and Bluseyness of those words... I love your serenades! Warm hugs & an understanding smile, Linda |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
 i can hear your heart in this, girlie, judst gotta love the bluesgirldrop me a line..okiedokie? |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
brushing back a tear that has no place to fall. Aw, hon... there's always a place... no farther away than the shoulder of a friend. Beautiful sadness you've written. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
brushing back a tear that has no place to fall... I agree, that line is tremendous. I wish I'd thought of it! This whole poem wrings my heart out, girl... it is excellent.  Caroline the only man worth your tears will never make you cry |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!! Bluesy....this is fantastic..even with the ache. Hugs sweet lady! ~ Let peace begin with me... |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Hands won't work on this one....has to be a shoulder. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
^5 to you on this precious write PoetFriendBlues... Hugs2u *~coco~* |
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Antonio_L Member
since 2003-12-01
Posts 110NorthEast USA |
Very powerful, I am so sorry for your sorrow. Tony. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Lady, this touches so deep...... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I think I'm taking a dive!!  Many thanks for all your nice replies! |
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