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crown the king |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
I will find, inside, a place that I am not ashamed to face and with that jewel, I'll crown a king who's not afraid, of anything I will find, behind my face a differant man the world must face and with that gem, I'll crown a king who's not ashamed, of anything I will find, inside my heart an untouched place, that I might start and with that gold, I'll crown a king who's not afraid to love all things I will find, inside my strife an emptiness, to fill with life and with that truth, I'll crown a king who's not afraid of anything [This message has been edited by Jason Lyle (12-04-2003 02:00 AM).] |
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bbent Senior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 521Alaska |
Liked this... reminds me even even old cynics like me can be honed into someone special.really enjoyed your positive write in what can seem a negative enviroment. Live like it's your last day... |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Jason, I love the way you write. You ryhme so perfectly and with such ease. It doesn't seem forced at all! Very good!!  Hugs  Ethel |
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Gina Culliney Member
since 2003-03-08
Posts 170 |
This was a great piece Darkling, would like to see more of this type of poetry coming from you. As always straight and true. Well-penned indeed! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
such insightfulness and honesty in your writing, very cool |
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