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Silk and Satin, Everynight
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Silk and Satin, Everynight |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Silk and Satin, Everynight As I lay upon my bed tonight, I wish she was here to hold me tight. Silk and satin, everynight. In my arms she would feel so nice. Close to me, to kiss me goodnight. Silk and satin, everynight. JamesLee December03 2003 Not sure if I should have used lay or lie, or was or were. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Silk and satin sounds so sensual! Since you asked, James, I would have used "lie" and "were"! But please remember, I was not an English major! lol   EA |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
The glamour the feeling and the touch of a soul smile is what i think of when i think silk and sattin. Smooth and good feeling all the way through our, feelings of passion. Smile Jes |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Romantic and sensually sexy , I like this James Hope |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, and I wish for everyday for the sun to feel just like velvet to you when you embrace each new day with loves smile! (big hugggsssssss) God Bess You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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pictureme Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 248Ohio, USA |
silk and satin....loved the feel of the poem! pictureme :-) |
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