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titch k
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0 posted 2003-12-03 05:30 PM



Far beyond All skies
There no longer seems,
anything exaggerated
Compelling and alive,
all worlds; Red cloud
of morning shadows
Angels as white as swans;
And how my love came about

What wouldn't I like
to sing about;
All Cosmos spinning
in accordance;
Far wretched from
the cries of life;
To the praise of Kings,
from Sicilian legend
And listens, Love,
my dearest pledge

To city life, not yet in vain;
Who, with all their soul,
their heart and mind;
Adorn passing clouds
above the shrills; And
ordaining execution
Nothing distasteful
or abhorred peculiar;
Could sadness speak

To listen, a hundred
cares oppressed;
To stars and birds;
To babes and sages,
with open heart;
Approving nods
This is to be,
my symphony

Titch

The year is going,
moved Earth and Heaven;
That which we are, we are
Come my friends, moans
rounds, many voices;
Loves carves, clear cut silence;

© Copyright 2003 titch k - All Rights Reserved
PsychoticBunni
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Mythical Atlantis
1 posted 2003-12-03 05:33 PM


deep. it covers a lot of ground in a few stanzas. more than anyone realizes in 5 years. wonderful work.

Meg

tragedy is cutting your finger. comedy is falling into an open sewer and dying.
-Mel Brooks

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2 posted 2003-12-03 06:02 PM


Titch~
Just lovely ... and the title is to die for~
WONDERFUL~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2003-12-03 08:35 PM


~ and yours is a symphony divine, Dear Titch!

I enjoy your poetry. It takes me up and down and all around! It is always a journey that I enjoy!


EA

Jes
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Denmark
4 posted 2003-12-03 09:20 PM


Smile

Hope and lust for living life.

I enjoyed it wery much smile

Jes


titch k
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5 posted 2003-12-04 02:10 AM


thankyou bunnie
i love to dive deep and allow the twists and turns to wrap themselves completely
nice of you to share moments with me
love Titch

titch k
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6 posted 2003-12-04 02:11 AM


SMILE hi ther marge
MANY WARM THANKS for moments shared
love Titch

titch k
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7 posted 2003-12-04 02:12 AM


hi EA and i love your visits and your pleasant sharings
love Titch

titch k
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8 posted 2003-12-04 02:12 AM


g'day jes
warm gratitude for moments taken
love Titch

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