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Brad Majors
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0 posted 2003-12-03 04:44 PM


Parched lips
Speak empty volumes

Discontented masses
Herded
For free French kisses from
snarled dry tongues of
Blond Lesbian midgets

Dancing ugly naked
Erotic hysteria
Howling at
decadant Barney
In bondage gear

"Remember the Alamo"
vomit
at storefront windows
On Main

Parade of me
Bad dream
symphonic
Nightmare
To much religion
Taken before bedtime
Waking up
Dumpster
Back
Of Fatso's Pizza

Trying to piece
Together
Last nights
Twinkie orgy
too limp

Remembering
"Bless you my son"
As I crash again
In rotten banana peels...

[This message has been edited by Brad Majors (12-03-2003 04:46 PM).]

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cosmic-duality
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since 2003-11-24
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1 posted 2003-12-03 04:52 PM


that is a good poem man, I feel it.
PsychoticBunni
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since 2003-10-03
Posts 162
Mythical Atlantis
2 posted 2003-12-03 05:16 PM


ugh. i saw and heard and ...smelled everything that you put into this piece. which may or may not be a good thing.

Meg

tragedy is cutting your finger. comedy is falling into an open sewer and dying.
-Mel Brooks

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