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noah j
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on the open road with the wind blowing in my hair

0 posted 2003-12-03 03:16 PM


I see the lady I love all the time,
A glance through the window is all I need
And it does not hardly cost me an dime
To do this nasty, mischievous deed.
I see her skin as she starts to undress,
My gazes wish for her body to stay
In my mind where I am free to caress
Her loving flesh that yields to my hands which lay
Upon her rosy cheeks which disappear
When I awake from my dreak-like state
And I am left in front of a broken mirror
Small fractions of the man that I now hate.
   Love, I implore you to go from my mind.
   So, I can go off and leave you behind.  

the only people for me are the mad ones-mad to live, mad to be saved, desirous of everything at once--jack kerouac

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PsychoticBunni
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since 2003-10-03
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Mythical Atlantis
1 posted 2003-12-03 05:20 PM


ooh. dreams can be harsh, this i know. but keep dreaming. you know what they say. if you dream something all the time it may come true. It works you know!!

Meg

tragedy is cutting your finger. comedy is falling into an open sewer and dying.
-Mel Brooks

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Georgia
2 posted 2003-12-04 09:50 AM


well done
mytuesdaywishes
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a voice from the musicbox
3 posted 2003-12-28 03:13 AM


beautiful and real...perhaps one because of the other.

joy has its own justice. and dreams are languid and lawless. and everything bows to beauty, when it's fierce and when it's flawless...

Margherita
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Eternity
4 posted 2003-12-28 07:43 AM


Written with passion .... but love wants to stay! Some dreams are healthy!
Love, Margherita

harash
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India
5 posted 2003-12-28 07:51 AM


A lovely and passionate write...

always harash

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