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Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

0 posted 2003-12-03 03:01 PM

Light The Morn Of Vision Clear
~*Marge Tindal*~

This night lays down in lonely
Without love in heart surround
To wrap me gently in foreverly
So much missed, needed, wanted

Sweep my tears of ancient weep
Across a chasm of little sleep
Move me toward a morn in break
Knowledged of my heart-in-ache

Light the morn of vision clear
So I might see the reason here
That you are gone from a heart
That never wished for a depart

Praying the Gods of understand
Firmly lead with a gentle hand
To bring us back together when
Our hurt is healed from within

Then we’ll know the meaning of
Foreverly gifting of true love

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

Sparticus
Member

since 2003-11-15

Posts 245

1 posted 2003-12-03 03:07 PM

A beautiful Aubade, my dear friend. All I wish I could do, after reading this, is to hug someone. I just hope I don't get slapped doing so!

A wonderful poem, thanks for showing it to me.

Sparticus.

Even with insects-
some can sing
some can't

-Issa
http://www.geocities.com/amanaman3/Jessepoems.html

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2003-12-03 03:15 PM

May all hurt dissipate in the redawning of your love.

I really felt this one on a very deep level, Dear Marge. Take care, Dear One. You deserve the best that life and love have to offer!

Healing hugs,
EO

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

3 posted 2003-12-03 04:19 PM

that was a good read

I see the end of the ride murder suicide is how I'm feeling lately -Disturbed-

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2003-12-03 05:06 PM

Marge,
Lovely is as lovely writes.

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

5 posted 2003-12-03 05:10 PM

Marge,
when I read this, my eyes filled with tears and my heart clenched - then I thought I know this poet and I am proud to know her.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Martie

Moderator

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2003-12-03 08:25 PM

Marge/sis...Such a poignant plea...you've touched my heart.

Betty
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since 2002-08-13

Posts 1159
Virginia

7 posted 2003-12-03 09:50 PM

This is full of feeling Marge.
Love ya,
Betty

Trillium

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since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

8 posted 2003-12-03 10:09 PM

Dear Marge: This is so touching and I hope what you're wishing for, comes true!

Love
Betty Lou

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

9 posted 2003-12-04 04:08 AM

Light the morn of vision clear
So I might see the reason here
That you are gone from a heart
That never wished for a depart

Marge, thank you for this heartwarmer,
and all your foreverly poetry....

I'm going to sleep on this and hope~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2003-12-04 04:47 AM

a beautiful piece, I'm very understanding of

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

11 posted 2003-12-04 01:02 PM

How beautifully you've presented pain and longing. *S*

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

12 posted 2003-12-04 01:06 PM

oh Margie gal....HUGGGGGSSSSS
Even in it's sadness is much beauty....

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

13 posted 2003-12-06 03:59 PM

So very beautiful Marge.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

skyshine

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since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

14 posted 2003-12-06 04:07 PM

New beginnings are a wonderful thing, Marge...I hope yours comes to you soon. I felt this really well, too.

~sky

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

15 posted 2003-12-06 06:32 PM

Sometimes one has to choose for a short pain in order to prevent slowly 'dying' forever.

You know I love you, don't you Marge

Big Dutch hugs my dearest friend and thank you for the beautiful write.

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

[This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (12-06-2003 06:34 PM).]

NewEnglandlazurlu
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since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

16 posted 2003-12-06 06:50 PM

Marge, my sweet dear friend. How my heart breaks to read of your tears and loneliness. But I'm glad you can write about it and get it all out.

Time will heal and you'll be moving on.

Hugs and more hugs ... Marti

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

17 posted 2003-12-20 04:40 PM

Bless you all for your kind thoughts
... the vision has come true~

Praying the Gods of understand
Firmly lead with a gentle hand
To bring us back together when
Our hurt is healed from within

Then we’ll know the meaning of
Foreverly gifting of true love

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

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