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Open Poetry #30

The Way It Should Be

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2003-12-03 02:51 PM

Our words written in gold,
From my heart they are told.
This is the way it should be,
With you and me for eternity.
For you I would bleed myself dry,
And that my Dear is no lie.
This is the way it should be,
With you and me for eternity.
You burned strait to my heart and soul,
You pulled me out of my darkest hole.
This is the way it should be,
With you and me for eternity.
With you I know I won't fail,
And with you I shall set sail.
This is the way it should be,
With you and me for eternity.
For eternity you and me.

I see the end of the ride murder suicide is how I'm feeling lately -Disturbed-

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2003-12-03 03:55 PM

Kyle~
What an earnest poetic pouring from the heart~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

PsychoticBunni
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 162
Mythical Atlantis

2 posted 2003-12-03 05:10 PM

it's great that u have a girl like that to hold on to. eternity is a long time and I'm glad that you can be so sure that you two will last forever. How Troilus and Cressida.

Meg

tragedy is cutting your finger. comedy is falling into an open sewer and dying.
-Mel Brooks

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

3 posted 2003-12-03 05:12 PM

love the repetition and the rhythm of this piece.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

4 posted 2003-12-04 09:17 AM

Nice write kiddo

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