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Aimster
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0 posted 2003-12-03 01:02 PM


memories of an easier time
sweep across my mind
for a moment or two I'm lost
turning back the hands of time

your laughter was like sunshine
lighting up my days of blue
all it does is rain now
now that I'm without you

my heart still is beating
I guess that means I'm alive
Still though I wonder
Why I still have tears to cry

your grace surpassed all others
with you I always felt free
once again you and I shall meet
Together we'll live an eternity

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

© Copyright 2003 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
skyshine
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Beneath the northern stars
1 posted 2003-12-03 02:25 PM


Is this about your mom, Amy? It's very sweet and longing. Sad, but it was well done.

~sky

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10
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My own little Icey Oblivion
2 posted 2003-12-03 02:41 PM


whoever its about its a great poem about them

I see the end of the ride murder suicide is how I'm feeling lately -Disturbed-

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2003-12-03 02:54 PM


Amy, a love like that does last an eternity and you WILL be together again. I could feel the tears welling in my eyes as I read your heart-felt words.

Love, Light, & Eternal Life,
EA

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
4 posted 2003-12-04 02:24 AM


life goes on...and is so hard to do~
Hugs for you dear Amy~

garysgirl
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5 posted 2003-12-04 02:35 AM


Amy, this is so sad, but so well written.
Such heart is felt within. It really touched my heart.
Hugs  
Ethel

Aimster
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Charlotte, NC
6 posted 2003-12-04 05:55 AM


thank you all for your encouraging
words and support. and sky, yes this is
about my Mom. How intuitive of you
thanks again. you all make the pain a
little easier to bear, and the load a
little lighter to carry! hugs to you all.
amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

ParisGrl
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since 2000-06-01
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7 posted 2003-12-04 01:02 PM


Amy,

I'm sure she misses you as much as you miss her.....beautiful poem.  :-)

~Laura~

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