Poetry in Motion or Love is War

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Open Poetry #30

Poetry in Motion or Love is War

Ladycat

Senior Member

since 1999-07-05

Posts 782
At the edge and a doorway,TX

0 posted 2003-12-03 12:18 PM

I had this dream and it was such strange thing.. I didn't know any other way to put it. So here it is. Bare with me..

(Guy sits in his favorite chair watching football as his girl walks over and turns down the sound)

I love you
More than you will ever know or ever imagine

(He turns the sound back up)

I love you
The feeling is something
that you can't explain

(She turns it off)

I know that you will
never understand someone
loving you more than they
love themselves

(He looks at her and scrowls a bit)

I love you...
Why do you look at
me that way?

(She starts to cry)

Do my words hold
no meaning to you?

(He shrugs, stands and starts to walk to the kitchen)

I love you
Look in my eyes
and look in my heart

(She crawls behind him on hands and knees)

I love you
I love you
I love you

(Her words fade off as the door closes in her face)

Too much...

(She lays on the floor and curls in a ball by the door)

Love,
Ladycat

Dancing is the loftiest, the most moving, the most
beautiful of the arts, because it is no mere translation
or abstraction from life; IT IS LIFE I

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

1 posted 2003-12-03 12:38 PM

wonderful!

Masked Intruder

Moderator

Senior Member

since 1999-05-23

Posts 1231
Near golden sunsets

2 posted 2003-12-08 04:55 PM

That's incredibly eerie. But, then, most of my dreams have been lately.

Great write

-*-*-

Bad monkey.

PsychoticBunni
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 162
Mythical Atlantis

3 posted 2003-12-08 05:14 PM

oh the agony. so harsh and yet... most dreams are. lovely piece of work.

Meg

tragedy is cutting your finger. comedy is falling into an open sewer and dying.
-Mel Brooks

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2003-12-08 06:37 PM

Enjoyed...James

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

5 posted 2003-12-08 06:55 PM

Ladycat,
   I can imagine this one on stage--could be pretty real especially on Super Bowl Sunday!   Effective layout.  Smiles.
                         Sadelite

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