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Ada'doLisdo'ti
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since 2002-12-10

Posts 123
California

0 posted 2003-12-03 11:37 AM

To see the world through your eyes,
Your pain you try to disguise,
By telling yourself beautiful lies,
Ashamed of tears you cry.

Their imaginary violins play my heart bleeds for you.
Sarcasm piercing your heart straight and true.
Spending the night crying for the past.
Not over yours but those that didn’t last.

Your soul deflowered by ones you trust,
Telling you they did what they must,
As your heart lays bleeding on the floor,
You don’t think you can take anymore.

Their imaginary violins play my heart bleeds for you.
Sarcasm piercing your heart straight and true.
Spending the night crying for the past.
Not over yours but those that didn’t last.

You go on smiling despite your circumstance,
Always you keep trying to enhance,
Everyone’s life but your own,
Never allowing your heart to turn to stone.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2003-12-03 11:41 AM

Excellent write..very much enjoyed.
Hugs~

~ Let peace begin with me...

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2003-12-03 11:48 AM

who ever this poem is about...I admire them...especially if they are able to understand the awesome virtues that can come from hardships, building strength, compassion, courage, and the ability to deal with hardships easier then others. If we could only realize that nothing lasts forever, and things do get better with the morning sun's new day. In the end...a person who can endure hardship...is a person who places a much more stringent value on the lives of others...if they are aware of self respect and do not wallow in self pity and blame. Then, this person, I would choose always to be on my team...they are leaders, able to make choices....with a sound ability to perceive more then you would ever imagine.

Great write!

Ada'doLisdo'ti
Member

since 2002-12-10

Posts 123
California

3 posted 2003-12-03 03:43 PM

Thanks

The sweetest rose is one you'll die for...

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2003-12-03 08:33 PM

A very vivid portrait...well done!

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2003-12-03 10:02 PM

That last line tells all.
Welcome home, Albert. A very soulful write, my friend.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2003-12-05 03:35 PM

Nice writing...James

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