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kaleanna Member
since 2003-08-18
Posts 89TX, USA |
Elusive Dreams fell asleep alone, darkness surrounds her a warm gentle touch caresses her cheek soft flutterbye kisses placed gently on her face the warm embrace surrounding her, she feels so safe she feels so loved and cared for, yet wait.... what's that sound she hears in the distance? her eyes not wanting to open, this feels so real.... ...........yet is it? scared that if she opens her eyes this embrace will fade her heart pounding, hoping it's not just a dream her eyes open slowly as darkness again surrounds her the distant sound was the alarm clock waking her for the day she sighs...... it was only just a dream a dream that for now eludes her but she holds on to the hope that this "just a dream" fantasy will one day become her reality. Meesh (thank you again marge for the help with the title for this poem) [This message has been edited by kaleanna (12-03-2003 10:36 AM).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KaleAnna~ I do have one ... Elusive Dreams~ You nailed it~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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kaleanna Member
since 2003-08-18
Posts 89TX, USA |
ohhhhhhhhhhh i like that title marge, ty ty ty  hugsssss Meesh |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh yes...very nice writing (and title)  |
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kaleanna Member
since 2003-08-18
Posts 89TX, USA |
ty passsing shadows Meesh |
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