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Frozen and Shattered
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Frozen and Shattered |
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Masked Intruder
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Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets 
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It is my sorrow, my breaking heart. It is the frost that blankets my soul. It is the frozen traces of tears running in steady, clear rivulets. It is the ache behind my eyes, the everlasting gaze. It is the winter of my dying love in full-bloomed crystal magnificence. It is you, cold. And it is me, frozen and shattered. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Oh, what a chill this one gives me! lost love can really be a freezer burn good emoting |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
need some superglue for you? You certainly don't need it for this poem. Nice to see ya... All of my impurities are right here on my sleeve. This is Me"---Faith Hill |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Good to read your take on how lost love can chill to the bone...be well  |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
wow. The end really tied it all together beautifully. Awesome. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I know of that pain  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Yes, that is exactly how it feels when love leaves one's life. May you soon be back to your "full-bloom crystal magnificence"!  Healing hugs, EA |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Man, you need something to warm you up...like umm...a hot cup of tea. This is a truly from the heart write and going into my library! Chris  "At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
as beautiful as a frozen winter, I enjoyed the creative expression. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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