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Open Poetry #30

Canal-ed Dreams

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-12-02 11:39 AM

Canal-ed Dreams

pausing
in the running
of time
finds me
on the other
side of my heart
where Venice
has a boat
rocking in salt
upon a
fresh water sea
pushing away
my heart

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2003-12-02 11:41 AM

Exactly...
*
M

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

2 posted 2003-12-02 11:50 AM

Salt has more substance than fresh....boats float higher in it, can carry more and are harder to sink.

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Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2003-12-02 11:52 AM

OneSlick~

'pausing
in the running
of time
finds me
on the other
side of my heart'

Oh, my ... my ... my~
This is PERFECT~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-12-02 12:11 PM

Helen, I love the way you write.

Hugs

Ethel

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-12-02 12:49 PM

profound

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