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Loverlost
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0 posted 2003-12-02 10:16 AM



I met my Angel on the internet, and wrote this before we had even met in person.


I will never forget all the times we share
The touching of hands
The smile
The kiss

I did not know how a love could grow
With each passing day
This feeling
I'd miss

If you weren't there
To give me a smile
To banish a tear
To hug
And to care

How have I lived until now? they'd ask
If they knew how I felt
How I tremble
For you

And my reply, I don't know!
I don't think that I did,
I was waiting,
And waiting.
That's true

Each moment we have
Is so precious to me
I long for your words
For your voice
For your touch

And your kiss, is the thing, yes!
I yearn for at night
When all has gone quiet
Then I need it
So much

And more, yes I know
When you feel it is right
Then more we shall know
Of each other
And then

Our love it will bloom
Like flowers in spring
But never to fade
In the autumn
Again

Never forget, whatever else fails
You'll always have me
To lean on
To care

For the rest of your life
I promise you now
I never will leave
I shall always be here


Love is like Mumps.....the older you are when you catch it....the worse it feels

[This message has been edited by Loverlost (12-02-2003 10:18 AM).]

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Aimster
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1 posted 2003-12-02 01:31 PM


beautiful write and from the heart!
i hope you and your love have a wonderful
life together!
take care.
amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-12-02 01:34 PM


This is beautiful. I hope, too, that you and
your love are together forever.  
Hugs  
Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (12-02-2003 01:35 PM).]

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3 posted 2003-12-03 02:03 PM


Wonderful format, great thoughts!

Why didn't you rhyme one of the stanzas?  It just got left all alone there by itself.  *grins*

-*-*-

Bad monkey.

Loverlost
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4 posted 2003-12-05 09:30 AM


Many thanks for your comments. And yes, we ARE together :-)
As for the "lost" stanza..well I guess it just kind of rhymed with itself!

Love is like Mumps.....the older you are when you catch it....the worse it feels

SharaRose
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5 posted 2003-12-06 05:00 AM


Very nice. Such looving words. They must be a comfort to her to hear them. Very sweet. Very much enjoyed this.
Love,
Terri~

Well I will go down with this ship
And I won't put my hands up and surrender...Dido

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6 posted 2003-12-06 01:13 PM


how romantic!
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