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dr_jones
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since 2003-11-30
Posts 16
Michigan

0 posted 2003-12-02 12:53 PM


She makes me smile
She makes me laugh
My girl she gives me it all
She shares herself
She gives her soul
My girl the one I love ive told
How much she means to me

To see her soon, and have her near
Is my only wish, for this new year
So Santa Please bring this one wish
Please bring me my girl
for our first kiss!

© Copyright 2003 Del Jones - All Rights Reserved
jaicie114
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since 2003-09-27
Posts 750
On the edge of forever
1 posted 2003-12-02 12:57 PM


Wow, dr_j...

I certainly hope you get your Christmas wish! A very sweet verse. Thank you!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~
2 posted 2003-12-02 01:22 AM


This is so sweet.. how can she resist? Such a loving heart you have.
Love,
Terri~

[This message has been edited by SharaRose (12-02-2003 01:36 AM).]

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
3 posted 2003-12-02 01:28 AM


How can Santa refuse such a sweet and earnest request! Merry Christmas!


EA

GG
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since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532
Lost in thought
4 posted 2003-12-02 01:46 AM


awww this is so sweet,
I certainly hope it comes true soon and forever

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

Loverlost
Member
since 2003-11-25
Posts 89
UK
5 posted 2003-12-02 09:12 AM


I hope you get what you want....keep wishing and maybe....

Love is like Mumps.....the older you are when you catch it....the worse it feels

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
6 posted 2003-12-02 09:14 AM


I do hope you get your wish Dr.
Hugs~

~ Let peace begin with me...

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
7 posted 2003-12-02 01:30 PM


i hope your wish and dreams come true!
santa if you're listening
take care.
amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

garysgirl
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since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
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8 posted 2003-12-02 01:38 PM


Awww, this is so sweet.
I hope that Santa's brings your wish to you!
Hugs  
Ethel

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
9 posted 2003-12-02 06:28 PM


You mean Santa gives women for gifts...I'm on my way to the mall...Jams
Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519

10 posted 2003-12-02 08:19 PM


dr_jones,
   Cute and sweet.   Good luck to you!
                             Sadelite

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