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Open Poetry #30

I Love You...

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2003-12-01 11:01 PM

listen to me
does it sound like i hate you
does it sound like i hate you
i dont
i love you
is that so hard to believe
are you so far gone
that you cant hear me screaming
screaming
i love you
open your eyes to me
look at me
read my lips
read my heart
i love you

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-12-01 11:03 PM

This is very beautiful.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

2 posted 2003-12-01 11:52 PM

sometimes it takes more than words and looks in eyes.

enjoyed

All of my impurities are right here on my sleeve. This is Me"---Faith Hill

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2003-12-02 12:31 PM

Nice thoughts...hope they are looking for someone to love...hope you are the right one...James

dr_jones
Junior Member

since 2003-11-30

Posts 16
Michigan

4 posted 2003-12-02 12:33 PM

Very sweet words, although played havic with my eyes. (being so small) enjoyed it much.

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

5 posted 2003-12-02 01:56 AM

aww..this hurt to read. sometimes words don't make it all come together..sometimes actions act counter to the words spoken. I have known that, and it left me with so much confusion. Very hard to read this one. Lump in my throat. Choking back tears. :'(
Love,
Terri~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-12-02 02:09 AM

yeah...nice

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