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Open Poetry #30

Peace

Pezz1
Junior Member

since 2002-10-27

Posts 33
Scotland

0 posted 2003-12-01 10:37 PM

Peace

Do you see
the pain inside
the anguish
and hurt
the nights that i cried
the nights that i wept
the tears falling down
creating the seas
in which sorrows
would drown
would slip
to the depths
of blackest despair
to linger and thrive
to grow through my cares
my heart as the ocean
your love as the moon
i eddy and flow
to your every tune
one minute i'm calm
the next theres no rest
my heart pulses madly
within this torn chest
cast loose as i am
set free on the flow
i dream of your smile
and peace i'm never to know.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-12-01 10:44 PM

Awesome poem here.

Cold hands means a warm heart

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

2 posted 2003-12-01 11:12 PM

Love the rhythm of this, and also the content, well done, Pezz1

________ice
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passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-12-02 03:39 AM

this is sad...I love the sad ones

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