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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-12-01 10:25 PM

you honor me,
as you
acknowledge
that i
like you
dear heart,
exist,
between each
setting sun and
cerulean sea,
your song
familiar
its lullaby
seducing me,
by one as
fair in face,
and elusive,
as suddenly
you too breeze
thru, as your
flight tapers
off with his,
your journey
now untraceable

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2003-12-01 10:30 PM

My, but you do touch my heart...
Could this be a child, just as easily a lover...just as breezily a summer day.
Hugs,
TD

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-12-01 10:32 PM

This was simply beautiful.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

3 posted 2003-12-01 11:21 PM

The Inked One enters the ranks of short-line poets...and beautifully so. I like this.

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Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2003-12-01 11:31 PM

(smiles) Oh Michele, this is beautiful, sweet friend, your words always have an enchantment to them! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michele, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

5 posted 2003-12-01 11:50 PM

keeping this up there..

All of my impurities are right here on my sleeve. This is Me"---Faith Hill

dr_jones
Junior Member

since 2003-11-30

Posts 16
Michigan

6 posted 2003-12-02 12:09 PM

This is beautiful, I very much enjoyed reading it

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2003-12-02 02:58 AM

untraceable...yeah...(sigh)

...they usually are

[This message has been edited by passing shadows (12-02-2003 02:59 AM).]

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

8 posted 2003-12-02 02:04 PM

Michele, you are so talented. I love reading your poems. Everything is getting pushed down so fast that I miss them sometimes. They are so good, though!!

Hugs

Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (12-02-2003 02:04 PM).]

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

9 posted 2003-12-02 08:04 PM

inkedgoddess - you do write feelings well, I like it much, I do...

BC

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

10 posted 2003-12-02 09:59 PM

thanks for reading and giving your insights

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

11 posted 2003-12-03 06:03 PM

Honored as you should be.....enjoyed more than you know

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

12 posted 2003-12-04 03:04 AM

and elusive,
as suddenly
you too breeze
thru, as your
flight tapers
off with his,
your journey
now untraceable

Uncanny is the word that comes to mind...
funny how things change with the blink of an eye!!

Hey, love your new pic, and the latest shade of blonde!

lol~ I'm so out of the loop!

Hugs, you!!!

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