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KoKo
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since 2003-02-15
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Inside the shadow's shadow

0 posted 2003-12-01 01:18 PM


I can't find
Right And Wrong
Much less find
My own Breath.
I think I remember
Me shoving Him out the door
Last night
When the Poison
Became too much
And killed me.

© Copyright 2003 Lauren - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
1 posted 2003-12-01 02:36 PM


My sweet KoKo Puff! I hope that this was just a very bad dream!

Today's another day ~ go out there and make it a good one!

Your poems certainly can run a gamut of emotions! lol

Loves 'n hugs,
EA

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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highways, & byways, for now
2 posted 2003-12-01 09:01 PM


KoKo - sometimes it becomes that way... wishing you well...

BC

KoKo
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since 2003-02-15
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Inside the shadow's shadow
3 posted 2003-12-02 12:44 PM


Linda-

lol, yeah...Guess they do
I guess it could all just be a bad dream...Who knows? Somebody pinch me?

BC-

Thank ya

Loverlost
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since 2003-11-25
Posts 89
UK
4 posted 2003-12-02 09:29 AM


You seem to be doing OK for a dead poet..perhaps you should start your own Society?

Love is like Mumps.....the older you are when you catch it....the worse it feels

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178

5 posted 2003-12-02 10:56 AM


Wow!!

Powerful and stirring.

Eric

passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2003-12-02 12:54 PM


ouch
Mistletoe Angel
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7 posted 2003-12-02 05:06 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Lauren, I hope everything is alright, dearest friend, I understand how poetry can run so many emotions and that none of this is how you feel right now! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

KoKo
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since 2003-02-15
Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow
8 posted 2003-12-02 08:22 PM


Loverlost- LOL Thanks for the read and comment

Eric- Thanks for the Wow!! It always feels great to get those (=

PS-

Noah- Thank ya.

Edder
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since 2003-04-02
Posts 671

9 posted 2003-12-05 02:34 PM


no words just
duckysgirl
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since 2003-11-19
Posts 26
Down South
10 posted 2003-12-05 02:37 PM


KoKo...i really enjoyed this. Sometimes the poison scares me too...and then there are times when i welcome it!!!

Duckysgirl

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