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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-12-01 10:14 AM

Clutching Clouds

I saw your beauty
it flew across the sky
caught the wings
of my lowest breath
and oh how you fly
how you fly

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2003-12-01 10:41 AM

and oh, how beautifully this write flies across the blue!

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

2 posted 2003-12-01 12:05 PM

"caught the wings of my lowest breath"--very pretty and accentuates your title... Much enjoyed.
Sadelite

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

3 posted 2003-12-01 12:08 PM

Beautifully written

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-12-01 12:10 PM

stunning

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

5 posted 2003-12-01 01:36 PM

you soar!

Larry C

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since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

6 posted 2003-12-01 02:57 PM

You rock!

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2003-12-01 04:18 PM

"Clutching Clouds"...perfect Helen...great title

*s
M

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2003-12-01 04:51 PM

OneSlick~
You are just a wonderful poetess~
I love the all of this~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

9 posted 2003-12-01 08:58 PM

helen - it's been a while, lovely as always...

BC

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

10 posted 2003-12-14 02:54 PM

This literally took my breath away! What a great grouping of words.

PS: Thanks for your comment to my first posting. There is so much passion (and talent) on this website, it is rather overwhelming!

Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

11 posted 2003-12-15 05:42 PM

absolutely captivating poetry - Paul

Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

12 posted 2003-12-22 05:37 PM

and you do know about flying . . .

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

13 posted 2003-12-22 06:09 PM

nice write

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

14 posted 2003-12-23 03:03 AM

yes

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