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titch k
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0 posted 2003-12-01 07:33 AM



Then, be on your way,
smooth skinned lover boy
Meet adoration,
with many voices;
They to whom,
foolish passion,
shakes fancy;
Spirit hath not set;
Intersect, and give
a name too;
Or they run into one;

March on smiling;
Leap rainbows,
with blinded eye;
Such plenty and perfection,
never was found lustrous;
In the City of overscored,
adorning gratification and greed;
I shall sink in the remains,
having scope and breathing space;
Ringing grooves of change

Titch

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Sparticus
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1 posted 2003-12-01 08:06 AM


Richly done piece with a lot of heart.

Good stuff as usual, my friend.

Sparticus

Even with insects-
some can sing
some can't

-Issa
http://www.geocities.com/amanaman3/Jessepoems.html

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2003-12-01 08:10 AM


Titch,
Well done, enjoyed.

jaicie114
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On the edge of forever
3 posted 2003-12-01 10:55 AM


March on smiling;
Leap rainbows,
with blinded eye;

Wow...titch...such incredible imagery. Thank you!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

titch k
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4 posted 2003-12-01 03:23 PM


Thanks J
For moments taken, in sharing and critique,
i appreciate muchly
Titch

titch k
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5 posted 2003-12-01 03:24 PM


hi there Seymour,
so glad it brought a smile
love Titch

titch k
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6 posted 2003-12-01 03:24 PM


hi jaicie
what a joy to read and share
love Titch

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2003-12-01 03:48 PM


Whew! That was a close call, Titch! Sounds like you managed to escape that Lothario with your dignity still in tact! ~ and lived to tell the tale very well!


EA

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8 posted 2003-12-01 04:56 PM


Titch~
I totally enjoyed the richness of this penning~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Enchantress
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9 posted 2003-12-01 05:00 PM


Excellent write!
Love your use of imagery in this piece.
Hugs~

~ Let peace begin with me...

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10 posted 2003-12-01 05:22 PM


I enjoyed your poem.
Hugs  
Ethel

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