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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-12-02 12:28 PM


A World of Pretend


How many live
in a world
of pretend,
not having
a real world
of love to
live in.

JamesLee
December01
2003

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jaicie114
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1 posted 2003-12-02 12:30 PM


Awwwww...James,

Sometimes it's just that the real world is a little too...you know...real?  Pretend is so much easier on the body and mind!

Awesome verse, though!  Thank you.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2003-12-02 12:43 PM


I can appreciate that jaicie...James
SharaRose
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3 posted 2003-12-02 02:10 AM


Well maybe it's just a good place to hang around until the real comes knocking...if you've sought it just may be on the fringes of coming your way. Maybe?
Love,
Terri~

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4 posted 2003-12-02 02:11 AM


All. Or so I think sometimes.... but sometimes I think, None.

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Jes
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5 posted 2003-12-02 02:56 AM


Alot does that, really alot.

I did for long to long to.

Smile thanks

Jes


Loverlost
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6 posted 2003-12-02 09:10 AM


I did. THen I thought I had left it. Now I am not sure.

Love is like Mumps.....the older you are when you catch it....the worse it feels

Enchantress
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7 posted 2003-12-02 09:12 AM


At times the real world is just too cold you know?
I like the way you think James Michael.
Hugs~

~ Let peace begin with me...

LeeJ
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8 posted 2003-12-02 11:11 AM


I think the words real and has a different interpratation to each individual, no one else can deem that for us, or should...we are what we believe we are and things are as we believe them to be...why criticize what works for others, what we should be consentrating on is ourselves, leaving this place in better order then we found it, deciding whether we ourselves are fake, or real?  

Good good write.  

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9 posted 2003-12-02 02:18 PM


James, you said a lot in these few words.
A very thought-provoking write. sometimes,
though, fantasy and pretend is so much easier
to cope with than the real. Sad, but true.
Hugs to you  
Ethel

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10 posted 2003-12-02 04:06 PM


Thought provoking write, James.

believe in what your heart feels...

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11 posted 2003-12-02 04:11 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh James, I currently sit in this realm and I dream ever so much of getting to love a dream girl from the heart, as I haven't even gotten to hold ones hand yet! (sad sigh) I guess however the best things come to those with patience so in a way this place is beneficial, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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