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Open Poetry #30

Profoundness [threeliner]

Essorant
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since 2002-08-10

Posts 4769
Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada

0 posted 2003-12-01 01:04 AM

From the profoundness
Of a wide and spacey sea
Stars look up to thee

[This message has been edited by Essorant (12-01-2003 01:07 AM).]

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-12-01 03:44 AM

wow!

Loverlost
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since 2003-11-25

Posts 89
UK

2 posted 2003-12-01 06:00 AM

So much in so little..well done!

Love is like Mumps.....the older you are when you catch it....the worse it feels

Essorant
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since 2002-08-10

Posts 4769
Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada

3 posted 2003-12-01 06:39 AM

Passing Shadow & Loverlost

Thank you for your kind comments.

Glad you enjoyed.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2003-12-01 11:32 PM

What a compliment to the cosmos poet!
Enjoyed this little gem. TD

pictureme
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since 2003-11-28

Posts 248
Ohio, USA

5 posted 2003-12-01 11:38 PM

a haiku.....such a wonderful message in 17 syl. beeeautifully written!
pictureme :-)

KoKo
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since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

6 posted 2003-12-02 01:09 AM

BUMP!

Beautiful ^_^

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2003-12-02 01:20 AM

Dear fellow Canadian, this write was profoundly profound!

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

8 posted 2003-12-02 01:26 AM

:-) Very nice!
Love,
Terri~

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