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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2003-11-30 08:31 PM

~*~
We step between
The rise and set of destiny
My eyes are kissed repeatedly
Your smile traced an imprint warm
Such spirit that remains my shelter
In effigy of willows high
To climb a mountain’s magic sigh
Whispered secretly in shivered reverie
A patient stand and lean belie
Such mighty craving finds its crest
Your finest hour at twilight blessed
Within my arms filled full and all
To you my love my heart does call
Over and over in echo of sands
Slipped from the creases
Aligning my hands in your touch
Of soft bewilder feathers brush
So wide my see, into your look on me
Sparkling mirror of this dance
On lakeside waters rippled chance
The rise and set of destiny
We step between

Copyright Kkh 11/30/03

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

1 posted 2003-11-30 08:36 PM

i got an image of all that in my head twas a nice piece

We do away with your kind...I am war I am pain I am all you've ever slein I am tears in your eyes I am truth I am lies. Dimmu Borgir

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2003-11-30 09:28 PM

If I were this dude....I think I would be
on a bus...a train...or something...going
like a bat out of hell in your direction...

Beautifully done K. you do this impressively

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-11-30 09:31 PM

Beautifully penned Kathleen...
Very much enjoyed the read.
Hugs~

~ Let peace begin with me...

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

4 posted 2003-11-30 11:08 PM

I kept coming back to this line.

"We step between the rise and set of destiny".

Nicely done.

"A spring shower was cause to run
Until you twirled me in the rain" ~ BDC

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-12-01 03:58 AM

awesome! well done!

jaicie114
Senior Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 750
On the edge of forever

6 posted 2003-12-01 10:57 AM

TD...WOW!

Thank you!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2003-12-01 11:18 AM

TD

Filled with passion and beauty!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

8 posted 2003-12-01 01:39 PM

That is some Dance, TD! A romantic and passionate piece of poetry!

To love & romance!
EA

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

9 posted 2003-12-01 08:31 PM

ThisDiamond - you know what? This has to be the most beautiful poem you have written that I've read, and I"ve read many of them. This is just great, I like it much...

BC

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

10 posted 2003-12-01 09:42 PM

Kathleen~
So graciously elegant~

'Within my arms filled full and all
To you my love my heart does call
Over and over in echo of sands'

*sigh*
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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