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inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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0 posted 2003-11-30 08:55 AM



i will think no evil thoughts
i will think no evil thoughts
i will think no evil thoughts

because.............

god will spit nails into the mighty wind and

it will pierce my eyes and

i will bleed vials

of shame, just because i

thought these thoughts........

and the stars will not write stories just for me........

and the sea will not rebirth the goddess the first of summer nights when i reunite with its sacred smelll under the silvery awning, feeling like the return of the beautiful lover showering all over me...............

and i won't wear the face of the creator, that i am unsure of anyhow, while making love and reaching heaven with the phantom lover..

i will think no evil thoughts........(for today)

i want to be pure as an embryeo,

let the angels sing my name along with the holy ones,

i want to dip my tainted body
into the virgin snow
as it bleaches this dingy looking sky,
that's made me think these evil thoughts today.

© Copyright 2003 inkedgoddess - All Rights Reserved
ihavetea
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since 2003-11-28
Posts 3

1 posted 2003-11-30 09:05 AM


i enjoyed this -- the struggle between doing right and wrong, fear of censure, and the ultimate human failing.  this speaks volumes.  nice job!
Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2003-11-30 10:37 AM


smiling at your resolve today

namaste
peace

incensed thoughts

sit in the circle
of love

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2003-11-30 12:37 PM


maybe I should print this out and tape it on my mirror...


littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
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New York
4 posted 2003-11-30 03:25 PM


Ohh Michele . .  I adore this write
mann you slam it right home, as always
the punch . .  left me with a black eye
but worth it . . . I have ice here
*smile*
This is brilliant
and an extremely difficult task

xxoo

bklynboy
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since 2002-12-15
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florida
5 posted 2003-12-01 06:06 AM


Wow...this is different. Good Job!
inkedgoddess
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6 posted 2003-12-01 06:43 AM


thanks for reading people
and bboy your know by know im the spice in your life

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
7 posted 2003-12-01 08:48 PM


Michele - oh go ahead anyway, just because...

BC

bklynboy
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florida
8 posted 2003-12-08 05:48 PM


loved it had to see it again
PassionandFun
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since 2003-07-30
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9 posted 2003-12-17 03:20 PM


Evil thoughts are appropriate when they involve both passion and fun - i say go for it! (unless you were thinking something else evil!)
redheart angrybraids
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since 2000-04-16
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10 posted 2003-12-18 05:47 AM


how curious
and lovely tucked in the dark shadows of day time, i am feeling this crisp tangent

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids


inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
11 posted 2003-12-18 06:45 AM


thanks for stoppng in and helping me stop these evil thoughts...lol
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