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Jes
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0 posted 2003-11-30 08:20 AM


It was a simple day of routine ...
The day seemed long and never ending.
Nowhere, were i looked i saw my normal day ...
It came to mee as fast as it went.

She is my thoughts and i like her ...
But how to change a world, with thoughts within.
Hearts will come and go, but why ...
But when begins my heart the giggling.

The day after tommorrow no she looks so open ...
But when will time be time.
I want to know, but not when i hurt, or shall I ...
I feel like the thief in crime.

Its not okay to feel bad and not enjoy or ...
I like her smile her eyes her look her soul.
Is it mee thats wrong or is it just to be done ...
I am really uncertain of my own goal.

But her soul ...
Is what right know makes me whole.
So were is my heart ending ...
Thats wery much depending.

Smile

Jes

Hehheheh i really like her. " Smile "

[This message has been edited by Jes (11-30-2003 11:17 AM).]

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2003-11-30 08:45 AM


Jes
An interesting read.

Jes
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2 posted 2003-11-30 11:18 AM


Smile thanks Seymour, sorry of the spelling, i have went it through, smile

Jes


passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-11-30 12:52 PM


Jes, it sounds like you're in love...I hope things work out for you and her
Jes
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4 posted 2003-11-30 12:56 PM


Smile maybe

Isnt many poetic words born in the raise of love.

Smile

I love to bring out what my heart tells.

Jes


JamesMichael
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5 posted 2003-12-02 12:26 PM


Nice...James
Midnitesun
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6 posted 2003-12-02 12:45 PM


SMILING, je comprends.
Her smile has stolen your heart, Jes.
No spelling error can cover up that truth.

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2003-12-02 01:02 AM


I think that you are smitten, Jes! This was such a refreshing poem of sweet and innocent love. A beautiful soul connection!


EA

jaicie114
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8 posted 2003-12-02 01:05 AM


Yes, Jes...I think it's pretty apparent you like a lot more than her smile! Good luck and thanks for the sweet verse.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

Jes
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9 posted 2003-12-02 02:50 AM


Thansk - James

Smile yes when i think of her " Sighhh " Thanks for reading Midnitesun.

Pure as the heart - thanks Earth Angel

Smile yes i guess too smile - Thanks for reading Jaicie

Smile

Jes


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