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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2003-11-30 07:11 AM


Music Box

Sometimes I feel a music box
A vox hu-ma-na called to sing
Perhaps a colored jukebox
With a heart the coin of ring

I never know when I will play
Or if within the day or night
All I know the coin is clay
And I light up in mellow bright.

In notes that speak a simple goal
I play the music of a dove
And sound comes out my very soul
In the echoes of pure love

It happens every time I kiss
An arrow seems to pierce my heart
It puts me in a state of bliss
And that is when the music starts

But now my parts have worn to thin
And takes a while till I begin.



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Jes
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1 posted 2003-11-30 08:05 AM


Smile

But they are still there.

enjoyed

smile

Jes


Janet Marie
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2 posted 2003-11-30 08:38 AM


All I know the coin is clay
==========================

You are just too cool for even your own good. LOL
I adore that line...it's sooooo you.

And I light up in mellow bright.


Most shining stars do ....and you are such a brilliant beacon.

Trust me, your box still rocks ...
your parts are still state of art.

(and your winkies still work) LOL



When I'm with you my eyes are so wide ...
you reached right in my head and turned on the light inside
turned on the light in my mind.

David Gray

inkedgoddess
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3 posted 2003-11-30 08:48 AM


i never know what i will play......
play another sunday morning for us,
good morning, nice to see you bright and early

Enchantress
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4 posted 2003-11-30 09:37 AM


"It happens every time I kiss
An arrow seems to pierce my heart
It puts me in a state of bliss
And that is when the music starts"

Ahhhh..this made me sigh Sy!
Beautiful Sunday morn write here.
~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~

      ~ To love and be loved
is to feel the sun from both sides ~

vandana
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5 posted 2003-11-30 09:54 AM


enjoyed
Earth Angel
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6 posted 2003-11-30 10:01 AM


Good morning, dear Maker of Music!

As a collector of music boxes, I would treasure one such as yourself!

Loves 'n hugs,
EA

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2003-11-30 10:08 AM


Jes
Glad you enjoyed.

JM,
And you will always be my tinkerbell.
WWRS

inkedgoddess
Would be my pleasure, Hugs.

Thank you Nancy, be right there for tea.

vandana
Thank you dear.


Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2003-11-30 10:09 AM


Earth Angel
LOL And what would you like me to play?

Duncan
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9 posted 2003-11-30 10:39 AM


Good Morning Sy!!  I'd love to have a listen with my coffee!  
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10 posted 2003-11-30 10:45 AM


a musical delight
to wrap up the night
and start the day
out right

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2003-11-30 11:17 AM


Duncan,
Any old music box will do.

Midnitesun
Thank you my dear.

passing shadows
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12 posted 2003-11-30 12:33 PM


*warm smile*
wranx
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13 posted 2003-11-30 12:38 PM


Ahh, but once begun?

You're an old devil, you are.

Nicely played, friend Sy

jaicie114
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14 posted 2003-11-30 01:41 PM


"In notes that speak a simple goal
I play the music of a dove
And sound comes out my very soul
In the echoes of pure love"

::sigh::

indescribably beautiful...all of it!

Thank you, Seymour.

Love and Light...jc


This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

[This message has been edited by jaicie114 (11-30-2003 01:42 PM).]

Martie
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15 posted 2003-11-30 02:07 PM


Sy...The music of your words all ways touch me.  
Magnus
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16 posted 2003-11-30 02:33 PM


I relate well to this slow start problemo.

Nice write Syster...

Seymour Tabin
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17 posted 2003-11-30 02:37 PM


passing  
Thank you sweet.

wranx,
Yea I guess my musicbox is still going. LOL

Love and Light back,jc.

Martie,
As yours always touches me.



Seymour Tabin
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18 posted 2003-11-30 02:38 PM


Magnus,
Always a pleasure to read your replies.

Patricia
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19 posted 2003-11-30 05:30 PM


Thank you for the daily concert you sing for us in your words and wisdoms.  

Patricia

Seymour Tabin
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20 posted 2003-11-30 05:51 PM


Patricia
I thank you for your patronage.

garysgirl
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21 posted 2003-11-30 08:34 PM


Oh Seymour, can't love cause us to play
sweet music with our Honey-love?  
Hugs  
Ethel

Seymour Tabin
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22 posted 2003-11-30 09:14 PM


Ethel,
You're right about that sweety.

titch k
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23 posted 2003-11-30 09:47 PM


love your style of verse SMILE
love Titch

Seymour Tabin
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24 posted 2003-11-30 10:40 PM


titch k
Love your replies.

EagleOne
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25 posted 2003-11-30 10:51 PM


Excellent!

"A spring shower was cause to run
Until you twirled me in the rain" ~ BDC

Seymour Tabin
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26 posted 2003-12-01 07:38 AM


EagleOne
Thank you so much.

suthern
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27 posted 2003-12-01 11:01 AM


I've no doubt you're worth waiting for, my friend. *S* I like this very much. *S*
Sunshine
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28 posted 2003-12-10 10:25 AM



There is something very special about
the quality of a fine music box...

they are a most special gift...

Seymour Tabin
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29 posted 2003-12-10 03:29 PM


suthern
Thank you love.

Sunshine,
Yes I did.

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