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Open Poetry #30

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Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2003-11-30 03:09 AM

"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda

WildPoet
Member

since 2003-11-10

Posts 205
California

1 posted 2003-11-30 03:18 AM

Such a lonely feeling, follows me after reading this. Very well written!

WildPoet

To earn respect, Give respect
To live life, nurture life
To enjoy Love, Share Love

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

2 posted 2003-11-30 10:33 AM

"inhale your shadow"

can that be any better?? such words lady, such words.....hugssss

Lauren~

I had a dream last night
you came to me on silver wings of light
I flew away with you in painted sky
Was it real
Is it what you see,touch or feel

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2003-11-30 10:38 AM

a beautiful write!

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

4 posted 2003-11-30 12:14 PM

Beautiful. I was left with that feeling of "falling into you" Much enjoyed this! SO pretty that feeling of touching.
Love,
Terri~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-11-30 12:16 PM

this aches well

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

6 posted 2003-11-30 02:22 PM

there are a couple of different layers to this piece... both of which are very close to me.

thank you, all...

so very much

snow

"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda

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