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the ant
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since 2003-11-30
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ca, usa

0 posted 2003-11-30 01:27 AM


Listen to Bob Marley
watch the cats fight
writing in this book
and willing to fly

airplanes overhead
Time never stands still
Blank space in white lines
Hearing voices
cats within
Jumping in your head
the cars are all dead

Mountains turn to dust
and you are still here
Time is even faster now
and you sit
still wondering what it will be like
in Trenchtown

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Member Rara Avis
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In Your Poetic Mind
1 posted 2003-11-30 01:45 AM


Time never stands still''


Oh and sometimes I sooo wish it would.....
very insightful...
Lauren~

I had a dream last night
you came to me on silver wings of light
I flew away with you in painted sky
Was it real
Is it what you see,touch or feel

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2003-11-30 01:56 AM


I can't put my finger on it but I like this poem...and can't really say why
martiniat8
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since 2003-06-21
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Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic
3 posted 2003-11-30 03:19 AM


trench town? interesting
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