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Honeybunch
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0 posted 2003-11-30 12:12 PM


CLOTHES OF AGES PAST

How delicate and soft the clothes of ages past
in graceful flow and comfort from shoulders of belief
attractive to and pulling in the eyes of passers by
to gaze and be amazed at the wisdom of the old.

Likened to a Barbie doll made before this time
days and nights of play have brought a different mould  
still beautiful to see but unexpressive of the soul
and the fabric of a mind lies coarse and unrefined.  

Another time, another place, in stores of lost and found
unto man will be displayed mind’s intricate design  
unused from way back when we chose to live again
covered head to toe in static skin and bone.

And there I’ll find a garment of deep intensity
fashioned and created from remembrances of love    
to draw unto myself the pleasure of your smile  
and your permanent approval of my distinctiveness.      

The clothes of ages past like who we really are
will arise again from history as if created new    
but today I stroke the folds of soul’s gentleness  
and feel inside the timelessness of mind’s energy.      

And I gaze and am amazed at the wisdom of the old
who dressed a human being in clothes of ages past,
placed her in a time zone unbefitting to her soul,
and allowed in her the feel of a mind’s silent need.

From then and when I chose to remember history
I walk a crooked line with the coarse and unrefined!

Helen


© Copyright 2003 Helen - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2003-11-30 12:15 PM


Helen...you are grace in writing.
Honeybunch
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2 posted 2003-11-30 12:20 PM


Thanks, Martie.  Maybe I'd prefer to be rich!  
Martie
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3 posted 2003-11-30 12:31 PM


To have your kind of grace, makes you rich.
passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-11-30 12:39 PM


I'd rather be rich too

good write!

Honeybunch
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5 posted 2003-11-30 02:05 AM


Yes, Martie, you're so right.  I forgot, you see, because I'm still a human being ... who sometimes thinks money in the bank is the way to just being "me".      
Honeybunch
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6 posted 2003-11-30 02:06 AM


Way to go, passing shadows!  They say that deed follows thought so I guess we're on our way to being rich!!
icebox
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7 posted 2003-11-30 03:52 PM


Wealth is not measured by what one hoards away but by what one gives away freely.

A great write as always!!!

Thanks for making me think when all I wanted to do was sleep.  

Honeybunch
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8 posted 2003-11-30 11:18 PM


Hi, icebox.  Isn't it strange how we never seem to get what we want in life.  I haven't figured out the reason for that yet although perhaps it's because we merely live on the fringes of belief - "ask and it will be given unto you" - fair enough but never does it say "when"!  
Thank you for reading!

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9 posted 2003-12-01 08:43 PM


A beautiful way to say....

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