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jaicie114
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since 2003-09-27
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On the edge of forever

0 posted 2003-11-30 12:03 PM


I trace the pathway
of my tears,
seeking the beginning
of love.

I wish to quench
my thirst in
the burning flames
of your desire.

I dispatch
my soul
on the wings
of a whispered breath…
To touch the
gossamer dream
that is
your heart.

Come to me
My Beloved,
and we will
explore
the myriad realms
of Infinity together.

Surrender your essence
to the One life,
the One mind;
and gain the
Intelligence of
the Universe…

Gifted to You
by Yourself.

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-11-30 12:46 PM


this is beautiful
redheart angrybraids
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2 posted 2003-11-30 12:48 PM


the last line is true
jaicie114
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On the edge of forever
3 posted 2003-11-30 12:50 PM


Thank you, passing shadows...

But, I actually shouldn't take credit for it. I was in a workshop tonight to learn about Sufism. We were listening to a chant, and when I opened my eyes...I just started writing this. So...thank you to whoever!!! LOL

Love and Light...jc

p.s.  still have very little idea about what Sufism is...but...hey...I got a good write from it. Isn't that's what it's all about?  

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

jaicie114
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On the edge of forever
4 posted 2003-11-30 12:51 PM


redheart...

yes, it definitely is...

Thank you.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

ThisDiamond
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5 posted 2003-11-30 06:02 PM


Wonderful flow of feelings here...
TD

Magnus
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6 posted 2003-11-30 06:32 PM


Very powerful,  passionate,  well written.
Nicely done.

jaicie114
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On the edge of forever
7 posted 2003-11-30 08:33 PM


TD & Magnus...

I sincerely thank you for your nice comments.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

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