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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-11-29 11:44 PM


Hong Kong Girls


To caress silky skin
mandarin style,
so pleasing to
my eyes.

They possess silky hair
and creamy thighs
where sensual
treasures
lie.


JamesLee
November28
2003
I call
her Fiona.
She calls
me Jimmy.


© Copyright 2003 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
Snow
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desert flower looking for rain
1 posted 2003-11-29 11:51 PM


ohhhh,
gave me a shiver. :-)
sexy write.
snow

"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda


passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2003-11-30 12:47 PM


I took one look at the title and knew it had to be you
jaicie114
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since 2003-09-27
Posts 750
On the edge of forever
3 posted 2003-11-30 01:14 AM


Ahhhhh, "Jimmy"...now I understand. This verse was penned **after** you met Fiona!

Great write!

Thank you.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2003-12-01 01:45 AM


Thank you Snow, passing shadows and jaicie for the nice responses...I can always tell when a like a woman...my thoughts get way ahead of my actions...James
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