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mysticpoe
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0 posted 2003-11-29 11:44 PM


I thought that I would try something different for those who know my writing. Let me know what you think, if you have a chance. Thanks poe.

It was just another__day
as usual
waking, without a clue
after those eight hours
my coffee__black
as usual,
I stare__ at that weary reflection
from the surface of this a.m
drink,
wondering__ how long
this time, my thoughts
will begin to deliver,
the days intro
again,  
as usual
without notice of the
weather
some things__ are just going to do
what they want,
as usual
I dine myself last
this self induced
offering
So I can stay__but I can’t
As usual,
And off I go, un-noticed
for another day.
Till comes the time
those eight hours
like I do__everyday
which by the way
I look forward too
as usual
for the next day.




If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

[This message has been edited by mysticpoe (11-29-2003 11:55 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-11-30 12:03 PM


MysticPoe~
I know that I like it~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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mysticpoe
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2 posted 2003-11-30 12:27 PM


Thanks Marge, to tell you the truth. I'm not crazy about the poem. But, I really appreciate you taking the time to comment. Thanks again.

poe

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3 posted 2003-11-30 12:44 PM


I like it...it's different

I can relate to what you write about....pretty neat

mysticpoe
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4 posted 2003-11-30 09:42 AM


passing shadows, I really appreciate you taking the time. Thanks a ton, to you and Marge. Maybe I can go other places.

Thank you,

poe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

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