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Gasped Reveal |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
So tenderly My mind enrapt around the thought of you Perhaps unfounded in a spell But I feel warmth blush within my veins As if I was created just for this To learn the softness of your skin The striking eloquence of your charms And the steel cut of your will This compote of illusion and blessed vision Perhaps I am the one to love you In falling down a well of velvet sensations Rapture Escaping from my throat Inaudible extrapolations That water in the secret places left to dream Beading into curve and crevice All the length of me An odyssey Immeasurable and panted in the draw Of every breath I take For you have become My one and only sustenance As in the lush of you My very soul is sated In divine and watchful eyes And my spirit free Copyright Kkh 11/29/03 |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
TD You are enclosed and free...a beautiful but not easy place to be. Lovely poem! |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
...so passionate. It made me think of what real love is meant to be |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Shakespeare would have been proud to have read this poem of deep love....It certainly is a treasure for you to keep for a day when eyes mist and lips lightly quiver in the anticipation of a lasting kiss... |
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pictureme Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 248Ohio, USA |
very romantically done. I would like to hear you recite this one! A very touching read. Nice job! pictureme  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
more admiration. you manage longing and all the intensity wrapped up with your trademark grace. how you do this, is beyond me-- just like biting a vanilla bean. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
For you have become My one and only sustenance As in the lush of you My very soul is sated In divine and watchful eyes And my spirit free Oh yes, Kathleen. This is exactly how it is!!  Hugs  Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is beautiful...and gives me hope |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhKathleen~ 'But I feel warmth blush within my veins As if I was created just for this To learn the softness of your skin The striking eloquence of your charms And the steel cut of your will This compote of illusion and blessed vision Perhaps I am the one to love you' Oh my ... I really love the gentle all of it~ You write so very delicately tender~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
TD... It was impossible for me to pull out my favorite line...all of it is so beautiful, tender, and touching. Thank you. Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Captured, free. A wonderful place to be. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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dr_jones Junior Member
since 2003-11-30
Posts 16Michigan |
This is very romantic and lovely, I am so pleased to have be able to share your words with my mind. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
For you have become My one and only sustenance Oh, yes. *S* This is so beautiful! *S* |
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