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Deb Lynne
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Where blue skies meet blue ocean

0 posted 2003-11-29 07:53 PM



I miss our quiet time
Our moments of bliss
When we had more
For that and this

Now its stolen glances
An occasional smile
A promise of something
In just a little while

After washing the dishes
The laundry gets done
A wink and a promise
It’ll be time for fun

Tucking in the children
Marking off the chores
Making it to the bedroom
In time to hear your snores


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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2003-11-29 08:21 PM


smile...

the dishes will keep.

Prioritize, lady, prioritize.

Thanks for the memory. That's about all that's left for me too.


tecoyah
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2 posted 2003-11-29 08:31 PM


How sad....been there though...number three on the way, guess its time for bed...lol
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3 posted 2003-11-30 12:35 PM


I understand...it's quite common...but sad all the same
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4 posted 2003-11-30 12:51 PM


DebLynne~
Don't just hope to find the time ...
make the time to do it now~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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jaicie114
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since 2003-09-27
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On the edge of forever
5 posted 2003-11-30 12:55 PM


Deb Lynne...

I just love your verses. Thank you.

But, they're all right...you know...MAKE the time. Heck, girl...those dishes will still be there...promise!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

Deb Lynne
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Where blue skies meet blue ocean
6 posted 2003-11-30 09:56 AM


This one comes from the fact that we now have my two youngest step children living with us.  From a teenager to young ones !!!
Bless the Mister's heart for being such a good one !

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