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Ericc
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0 posted 2003-11-29 11:05 AM



Nothing stand between this moment
and the next.

Every wall is built by hands of
time.

Tomorrow is not so far away.

And tonight...we dream of
broken walls.


© Copyright 2003 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
garysgirl
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1 posted 2003-11-29 11:08 AM


Eric, this really spoke to me.
I'm keeping it.....
Hugs  
Ethel

Margherita
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2 posted 2003-11-29 11:18 AM


And I join in this beautiful dream ... no walls, reach out! TOUCHED!
I love you, Master Poet.
Margherita

ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2003-11-29 11:26 AM


The awakening of two souls simulteneously, has such power to break down the walls...
It is the climax of a dream come true.
All blessings to you,
TD

Hockeychick19
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4 posted 2003-11-29 11:37 AM


Eric,

Beautifully done. I love it... It's a keeper.

~Kelly~

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

SharaRose
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5 posted 2003-11-29 11:43 AM


Wow...ahem..just wow!
Love,
Terri~

garysgirl
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6 posted 2003-11-29 12:07 PM


Thank you, Eric!!



"Tomorrow is not so far away.
And tonight...we dream of
broken walls." by Eric McCarty
  http://community.webshots.com/user/toniasmom



[This message has been edited by garysgirl (11-29-2003 12:09 PM).]

passing shadows
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7 posted 2003-11-29 12:50 PM


that...is an awesome write
jaicie114
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8 posted 2003-11-29 06:13 PM


Dear One...

The insight with which you write is only subdued by the beauty of your wondrous soul shining through each new creation.

Thank you seems so inadequate.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

Magnus
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9 posted 2003-11-29 06:18 PM


Yes,  time can do both...build walls as
well as soften them,  that they might be
gently removed..as love again grows.

cinnamongirl
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10 posted 2003-11-29 06:46 PM


Breathtakingly sweet, beautiful, profound, and brilliant.  The beauty of your words is only surpassed by the beauty that is you.

Thank you for sharing such spiritual magic.

I love you,
Moca

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11 posted 2003-11-29 08:19 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Eric, this is wonderful, sweet friend, God Bless You and may all these walls break down so we can all join in unconditional harmony together, yay! (sigh) This is wondrous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

JamesMichael
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12 posted 2003-12-02 12:15 PM


NIce...James
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