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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Embers In the embers of nights gleam Lay the essence of my dream Wafting o’er the fields of green Shifting idles of my preen Flying to and fro the glow All the secrets that I know Making patterns of the weave Into things that I believe Placing actors on a stage Some that never seems to age Drawn from out a wishing well Casting flames within a spell And I am captive in my seat Watching nuance of repeat Doing whirls that pierce my heart None of which will e’er depart And so the river flows the night Until the coming of the light |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
lol but when they do age they'll do it suddenly! g'mornin to you sir  guess this means the day has started.. and I should sleep before they all rise! Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Sy, keep sailing on that river of dreams. Much enjoyed!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Making patterns of the weave Into things that I believe here's to beautiful dreams, Sy  M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful morning read Sy! Chai tea today..and I'll pour. ~Morning hugs, Nancy~ ~ To love and be loved |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"Making patterns of the weave Into things that I believe" "Doing whirls that pierce my heart None of which will e’er depart" Ahhhh, Sy! So many wonderful phrases throughout this piece. What a lovely way to begin my morn! Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Flying to and fro the glow All the secrets that I know Making patterns of the weave Into things that I believe And I love reading those things, Seymour. Have a good day to day.  Hugs Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Alyssa, Good morning and thank you for the read. scorpio, I try, thank you. Maureen, I'll drink to that. Nancy, Be right there for tea.  Kit, Thank you sweet and hugs back. Ethel, You are a doll,  |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Lovely and lyrical...as always. Eric |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Well described the flight of fancy... Enjoyed your write dear Sy. TD |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ah, Seymour, as the song goes.."a dream is a wish your heart makes"...and may your heart wish for only the most beautiful of life's gifts. Lovely read. Hot biscuits and honey this morning? hugs, Chris "At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Eric, Always pleased to have you stop by. TD, My pleasure to have you read and comment. Chris, Hot biscuits and honey will be fine. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I know about those embers...*sigh* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, Me too. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good afternoon, T-Man! "Placing actors on a stage Some that never seems to age Drawn from out a wishing well Casting flames within a spell And I am captive in my seat Watching nuance of repeat Doing whirls that pierce my heart None of which will e’er depart" ~ This is so timely for me! In a few hours I shall be leaving for the theatre to watch my boyfriend's leading role performance!  Another beautifully written sonnet! You amaze me how you can keep them coming! You are indefatigable! ~ and very talented! Loves 'n huggums, EA [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (11-29-2003 03:31 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
And down the river, slowly drifting... life goes on... Nicely said Mr. "T".... thanx Sy. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Wonderful as always Sy. Huggles, Marti 'You cannot shake hands with a clenched fist.' |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel Boyfriend now that is interesting. I hope he did well and you enjoyed. Thank you Barry. Marti, THank you dear. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, he's not really a "boy"! I'm not that kind of an "angel"! lol Mind you, he is six years younger than I am! lol  Warm hugs, EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel, You mean younger than spring time. LOL |
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titch k Member
since 2003-11-25
Posts 123 |
hi seymour i am growing in your verse And I am captive in my seat Watching nuance of repeat Doing whirls that pierce my heart None of which will e’er depart And so the river flows the night Until the coming of the light such elequent closure perfect thankyou love Titch |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Ah, Seymour... Perchance to dream such wonders. Thank you ever so much for this beauty. Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
titch k You are kind thank you so much. jaicie114, Love and light back, thank you. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The rivers hold many a thing, like thoughts that drift around in rings... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine If your back thank you for the burp. Hope you had a good time. |
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