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Pain Inside
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lil' Angel Member
since 2003-11-14
Posts 116 |
This pain inside I do not know I never felt it until now I never felt it until I met you What is this pain I feel? Could it be love? Could it be that deep inside I know that we will never be? This pain inside I do not know [This message has been edited by lil' Angel (11-30-2003 02:07 AM).] |
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PsychoticBunni Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 162Mythical Atlantis |
sweet and sure. well unsure actually but u know what i mean. sounds like someone needs a little soul searching. and if it's not love, at least u got a great poem out of it. Meg I give you my number when you sad you call me i make you happy- "Don't Worry Be Happy" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Take the time to build a friendship as a stepping stone to love...by then the feelings will have gone away or grown stronger...James |
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WildPoet Member
since 2003-11-10
Posts 205California |
I like ti! Htat was good! Love hurts! WildPoet  To earn respect, Give respect |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lil' Angel~ Nice write ... and ONLY because you ask in your critique message ... a couple of typos that you can edit to fix~ Enjoyable~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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lil' Angel Member
since 2003-11-14
Posts 116 |
thanks for that info i guess i missed it in my read through [This message has been edited by lil' Angel (11-30-2003 02:08 AM).] |
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