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Opalescent Sky . . . . . . . . . (Triolet)
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Opalescent Sky . . . . . . . . . (Triolet) |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light 
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Through shuttered windows I looked upon sparkling snowflakes falling from opalescent sky. And in the distance stood a silent fawn, through shuttered windows I looked upon. The golden rays of morn's early dawn danced their light on flurries swirling by. Through shuttered windows I looked upon sparkling snowflakes falling from opalescent sky. [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (11-29-2003 01:53 AM).] |
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lil' Angel Member
since 2003-11-14
Posts 116 |
Excellent peom. Very beautiful |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oooooooo, very pretty scene! |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
E.A. Oh,I do like this form, and you have captured the image nicely using it......:-) _________ice ><> |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Beautiful images and a wonderful presentation!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is beautiful, Earth Angel! From the fawn, to the golden rays, to the delicate slowflakes, you captured the imagery brilliantly here. Very much enjoyed this!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel Must have been one of Santa's raindeers kids. LOL Beautiful write.  |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Linda Lou this is soooo pretty!!  I could see that sky and the little fawn. Just beautiful, my friend...and in one of my two favorite forms of poetry, too!! It's a keeper for sure!! Hugs  Ethel |
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periwinklewings Junior Member
since 2002-09-18
Posts 36Land of the Free |
This is soft and beautifully written. Peri |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful!! Eric |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Felt the gentle snow flakes on my lashes. TD |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You make me sigh! Such a sight, so beautifully shared. Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yay! Oh Linda, I saw the fawn in this and it was sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, you always bring out the smiling child in us all, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
lil' Angel ~ I thought I'd try my hand at writing a Triolet. I have been enjoying the ones that other poets have recently been posting. It's fun to stretch my wings ~ poetically speaking! lol  EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
passing shadows ~ Your "ooooooooo" made me smile! Have a wonderful day! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
ice ~ Thank you! I appreciate you saying so! It was fun to write and the end result sounds so different from my usual style! As they say, "Nothing ventured ~ Nothing gained! lol EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
scorpio ~ I truly enjoy creating ~ or re-creating ~ moments in time. I'm glad you liked it! Huggums, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mr. T. ~ I do believe that you are correct in your assumption! The fawn's nose was distinctly bulbous and was glowing red! lol  Angel hugs 'n kisses, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ethel ~ I am delighted that you have deemed this a  Thank you for all the support and appreciation that you show for my poetic efforts! Loving hugs, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Periwinklewings ~ I cannot help but smile every time I see your adorable name! Thank you, Peri. That was very nice of you to say! Warm hugs 'n smiles, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Eric ~ Thank you for the "Beautiful" reply! Have a great day! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
TD ~ ...how sweet! ~ and poetic! Thank you! Lovin' hugs, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Margherita ~ It pleases me that I was able to convey what I was visualizing in my mind's eye! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Noah ~ My "smiling child" is smiling at your smiling child! lol Happy hugs & giggles, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Kit ~ Ooops-a-daisy, Dear Fellow Ontarian! I almost missed your gorgeous reply! That was lovely, Dear Kit! ~ and I thank you for that! Have a wonderful day! Linda |
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titch k Member
since 2003-11-25
Posts 123 |
sighssssssssss what beautiful imagery Earth and the journey never ends love Titch |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Very well done Linda....Perhaps one day I shall try one myself... Your poetry is delightful.. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
titch ~ That was a very flattering reply! You are so sweet. Thank you very much. Warm huggums, Earth |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Barry, with your talent, you could write in any form and do it exceptionally well! Thank you for the "delightful" response to my Triolet! Love & Light, Linda |
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