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froggy
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0 posted 2003-11-28 10:52 PM


Reaching out my hand
I claimed your own.

In your eyes I saw that smile...
The smile I had waited so long
to see.

Upon caressing your cheek
I began to whisper______

only to be awaken from my sleep.


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In Your Poetic Mind
1 posted 2003-11-28 11:23 PM


awww dont ya hate being awoken from a dream??? lovely...whisper....

Lauren~

I had a dream last night
you came to me on silver wings of light
I flew away with you in painted sky
Was it real
Is it what you see,touch or feel

Snow
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desert flower looking for rain
2 posted 2003-11-28 11:47 PM




you wrote
the pang of that
waking moment very
nicely....
snow

"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda


garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-11-29 12:00 PM


Sometimes dreams should
last, shoudn't they?
Hugs  
Ethel

SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~
4 posted 2003-11-29 01:39 AM


psst...maybe it's a sign of things to come. You are so deserving!!!
Love,
Terri~

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2003-11-29 05:18 AM



ice
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6 posted 2003-11-29 06:17 AM


see, I told you it would get nice replies.....:-)

_________ice
  ><>

mysticpoe
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7 posted 2003-11-29 09:36 PM


Really enjoyed this froggy. Very nice ending.

poe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

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8 posted 2003-11-30 12:42 PM


Froggy~
Oh ... how lovely is this~
VERY~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~


~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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jaicie114
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On the edge of forever
9 posted 2003-11-30 12:47 PM


ahhhhh...doncha' just hate when that happens?

But, extremely well done, Froggy...thank you!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

Kristabell
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10 posted 2003-11-30 12:57 PM


I agree with all of you. You did an excelent job at describing that feeling. i hate it when that happens!!! Good job.
froggy
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11 posted 2003-11-30 01:49 PM


Thank-you everyone for the wonderful and
sweet comments.
I wasn't sure if this would go over in here
but thanks to ice I tryed it.
Thank-you all again.

Have a smiling and happy day.

Hugs to each of you

:-)

ThisDiamond
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12 posted 2003-11-30 06:00 PM


A sweet and sensual whisper little one...
Enjoyed.
TD

froggy
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13 posted 2003-12-01 12:08 PM


Thank-you ThisDiamond
for the nice comment

:-)

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