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Hockeychick19
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0 posted 2003-11-28 10:01 PM


How do you know when that special someone really cares about you?
Is it when they say I love you?
Or is it when they make you smile,
How about when they say that they’ll do anything for you,
Like, cross an ocean, climb a mountain,
Or just look into your eyes and make you cry tears of joy.

They hug you and squeeze you,
Until they can’t squeeze you anymore,
They help you become painless,
To talk to you and to listen to your problems and to help you through them,
And when the mood is just right they cradle your face in their hands,
Give you a kiss that feels so good and so meaningful,
That there are no words to describe it.

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

© Copyright 2003 Kelly Gambon - All Rights Reserved
martina
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1 posted 2003-11-28 10:13 PM


nice job kelly i really like this one.

         martina

Hockeychick19
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2 posted 2003-11-28 10:17 PM


Thanks Carrie.

~Kelly~

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

Suetang
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3 posted 2003-11-28 10:39 PM


Hello Kelly

Your words were so lovely and so very much enjoyed.

"Love is a power too strong to be
overcome by anything but flight"

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

froggy
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4 posted 2003-11-28 10:55 PM


I like this Hockeychick19.
Its speaks of sweetness.

:-)

Hockeychick19
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5 posted 2003-11-28 11:03 PM


Sue - I'm glad you enjoyed it so much.

Froggy - I try to express my feelings the best way I can... I'm glad you liked it.

Thanks everyone
~Kelly~

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

Ericc
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6 posted 2003-11-29 10:54 AM


Beautifuly told.

Eric

Hockeychick19
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7 posted 2003-11-29 11:26 AM


Eric,

Thank you... I'm glad you liked it.

~Kelly~

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

garysgirl
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8 posted 2003-11-29 02:28 PM


Kelly, yep, it feels just like that!!
Good write!
Hugs  
Ethel




"Tomorrow is not so far away.
And tonight...we dream of
broken walls." by Eric McCarty
http://community.webshots.com/user/toniasmom  




[This message has been edited by garysgirl (11-29-2003 02:30 PM).]

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