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Open Poetry #30

Cool Whispers... I think it's you

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

0 posted 2003-11-28 07:29 PM

In soft whispers
cool wind
wraps around me
I think it's you

[This message has been edited by BloomingRose (11-28-2003 07:30 PM).]

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2003-11-28 07:32 PM

Lovely Deb...very lovely.
Hugs~

~ To love and be loved
is to feel the sun from both sides ~

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2003-11-28 08:28 PM

A very intriguing write..thanx Deb.

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-11-29 03:42 AM

Deb, this is so pretty. It seemed that I could
hear the words in a whisper.

Hugs

Ethel

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

4 posted 2003-11-29 04:02 AM

So pretty!!!

Love,
Terri~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-11-29 04:20 AM

it's not hard to believe

nice write

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2003-11-29 04:52 PM

BloomingRose~
So very, very pretty~
Nice to see you lady~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2003-11-29 11:38 PM

I think so too...this is nice...James

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

8 posted 2003-11-30 01:26 AM

perfect! sigh
Lauren~

I had a dream last night
you came to me on silver wings of light
I flew away with you in painted sky
Was it real
Is it what you see,touch or feel

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

9 posted 2003-11-30 09:57 AM

enjoyed

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

10 posted 2003-11-30 11:18 PM

Perhaps it’s my mood but I read this two different ways! Either way it’s an excellent write!

"A spring shower was cause to run
Until you twirled me in the rain" ~ BDC

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