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Open Poetry #30

Overruled By Heaven

titch k
Member

since 2003-11-25

Posts 123

0 posted 2003-11-28 06:24 PM

Dearly Beloved,
hold me under
Let me drown,
in this ache,
'til there is nothing left;

Each muttered phrase,
plucking strings once;
And the owl,
one hundred years old,
changed;

Loves nymph, in the trees
Sweet delight, murmurings,
spreading out fully,
The child in a secret
hiding-place on Earth

The feeble hearted, ask
what distant valley,
or mountain gave this delight;
My smile sweet, and empty;
Plucking the golden blossom

The laughing demirep,
resisting advances;
The soul to feel the flesh,
overruled by heaven;
Braiding countless links

Titch

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2003-11-28 06:54 PM

Nice post Titch, sometimes this is how it
is, huh?

Thanx,

Barry

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

2 posted 2003-11-29 03:35 AM

sometimes I just wanna drown in it all, too.
I like this. Well said.

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-11-29 01:45 PM

awesome! love the ending lines

PsychoticBunni
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 162
Mythical Atlantis

4 posted 2003-11-29 01:50 PM

Ah love. such inspiring feelings and words come from it. what would we do without the feelings that you describe?

Meg

I give you my number when you sad you call me i make you happy- "Don't Worry Be Happy"

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