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mysticpoe
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since 2003-02-28
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0 posted 2003-11-28 04:23 PM


After winter
sounds the drifting green.
When the light of the moon
controls the scene.
Shadows are candid
summon by a breeze.
The starting moment
with time to heed.


This reminder -
which came
never ending
never dead -
for the reasons
this season
were the answers they said..


when light from above,
captures this moon.
Looking, the drifting sounds,
which loom.
They know your needs
the wants we’re in.
These flowering seeds,
and how it begins.


If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

[This message has been edited by mysticpoe (11-28-2003 07:02 PM).]

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ice
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since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404
Pennsylvania
1 posted 2003-11-29 11:07 AM


What? no replies to this yet...hard to believe! Perhaps the mystery is to deep? But all I did was scratch the surface of words to see the picture beneath....enjoyed reading this....:-)

______ice
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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2003-11-29 11:19 AM


How delicate and beautiful!
Love, Margherita

mysticpoe
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since 2003-02-28
Posts 883

3 posted 2003-11-29 12:24 PM


Thanks ice, I wasn't sure if I was going to get any responses on this. It is a bit out there. I appreciate you taking the time to read it thru, adding your very helpful comments. You have given me a clearer look at my own direction. Sometimes I'm not sure if what I right has any substance when it comes to others. Thanks a ton again.

poe

Margherita, Your comments always carry an aura of understanding and lovliness with them. I can sense that your feelings on life are much more beautiful than words can express. I always enjoy your visits. Thanks again.

poe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
4 posted 2003-11-29 12:47 PM


neat write....love the ending lines
mysticpoe
Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883

5 posted 2003-11-29 01:42 PM


Thank you passing shadows, Glad you enjoyed it. Good to here from again and thanks for stopping by.

poe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

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