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Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667
New York

0 posted 2003-11-28 11:00 AM


Tsk Tsk
I should have know,
that this love would never last.
But again was blind,
and got my self in a bind.

Tsk Tsk
I went on loving you,
for a bit to long.
broken and free,
I'm still just me.

Why do I wonder, why?
How come I seem to cry.
At the drop of a pen.
Now the time has flown by.
and I'm wondering when.

I'll fall in love again,
sometime soon.
I don't you, running,
the show anymore.
I'll make out fine.

                   Love,
             xXx~*KELLIE*~xXx
Graduation : January 29th 2004

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ecrivan
Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923
my own state
1 posted 2003-11-28 11:13 AM


The despair of lost love is clear here, except for a missong word or two in the stanza below: what did you want to say after I don't you?


I'll fall in love again,
sometime soon.
I don't you, running,
the show anymore.
I'll make out fine.

Be well and enjoy your holidays

[This message has been edited by ecrivan (11-28-2003 11:15 AM).]

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2003-11-28 11:17 AM


Kellie,
You do and did well.

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