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scorpio
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0 posted 2003-11-28 08:33 AM



Sugared Sand

Water lapping near
Softly shifting sugared sand
I hold you once more.

believe in what your heart feels...

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2003-11-28 08:34 AM


scorpio
Now that is sweet. Good one.

jaicie114
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2 posted 2003-11-28 08:44 AM


WOW!

Thank you.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

Enchantress
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3 posted 2003-11-28 09:25 AM


I know a place such as this Scorpio...
It has warm sugared sand and waves lapping the shore..
I had never seen anything quite like it before nor since.
I was told this sugared sand effect is caused by the wind..right?
This is lovely....very romantic.
Love your sugared sand thoughts.
~Smiles & hugs, Nancy~

      ~ To love and be loved
is to feel the sun from both sides ~

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2003-11-28 09:33 AM


Oh, my! You certainly have a way with words! You took me away from my home office this cold, rainy morning and put me in the arms of my man in a place where I would much rather be! Loverly, Dear Scorpio!

Thanks! I needed that!


EA

scorpio
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5 posted 2003-11-28 09:46 AM


Sy, thank you for your warm words of encouragement.

It is I who thanks you Jaicie for taking the time to read and comment.  Much appreciated.

Tinker, you're correct about the wind making the sugared effect.  I believe your presence at a beach of sugared sand would truly be enchanting.  Come take my hand and walk with along my stretch of sand.  Now that would be romantic!!

Linda, thank you.  I'm glad this  provided you with a daydream of escape.

believe in what your heart feels...

Enchantress
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6 posted 2003-11-28 03:36 PM



As he held her close,
the whispering sugared sand
formed their bed of love.

Thank you Scorpio for the inspire.
~Hugs to you today, Tinker~

Jason Lyle
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7 posted 2003-11-28 03:48 PM


Great senryu, Scorpio.

Jason

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8 posted 2003-11-28 03:50 PM


As once was said...."To the victor go
the spoils of war"....well,  so does
the sugar to one who speaks so eloquently.


scorpio
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9 posted 2003-11-28 04:16 PM


What a beautiful response Tinker!!  I'm humbled that my meager efforts could inspire you to write such a wonderful senyru!!!  Thank you for the bump.

Jason, thank you for your kind words.

Thank you Barry.  I'm very appreciative of your support and encouragement!

believe in what your heart feels...

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10 posted 2003-11-28 05:14 PM




(smiles) Yay! Oh Scorpio, this is beautiful, sweet friend, and may you forever find this paradise and share it with your love on the gumdrop peaks of Candy Land, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Scorpio, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

scorpio
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11 posted 2003-11-28 07:31 PM


I appreciate your kind comments, Noah.

believe in what your heart feels...

Hockeychick19
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12 posted 2003-11-28 09:25 PM


Scorpio,

This is absolutely beautiful.

~Kelly~

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

passing shadows
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13 posted 2003-11-29 04:45 AM


beautiful
scorpio
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14 posted 2003-11-29 09:00 AM


Thank you Hockeychick and Passing Shadows.  Your support means a great deal to me.

believe in what your heart feels...

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