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Open Poetry #30

Darling Flower

titch k
Member

since 2003-11-25

Posts 123

0 posted 2003-11-28 07:06 AM

Darling sweet Asif,
smooth skinned lover;
Why contemplate,
whirling dervishes;
This ritual trance,
captures reluctant
Cast groaning aside
You are caught up,
willing your soul away

Dawns invisible;
Arousing to rapture,
of Earth and seas
Blow West wind
of youth's delight
Even for that spirit,
divided sources
Restore life's tide

Turn this incident,
to your advantage
Albeit annoying, let's
have some breakfast;
And see if the answer
lays in the wine;
I shall call to you,
my darling flower;
Will you be ready?

Titch

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©Titch K 2003

jaicie114
Senior Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 750
On the edge of forever

1 posted 2003-11-28 08:35 AM

Titch...

Very nice imagery...I felt myself being "whirled" away. Thank you.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

Sparticus
Member

since 2003-11-15

Posts 245

2 posted 2003-11-28 10:51 AM

Titch, very well done piece, the images work very well...you are growing and growing.

Sparticus

Even with insects-
some can sing
some can't

-Issa

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2003-11-28 10:59 AM

Titch, Titch, of course. Enjoyed

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